Adjust quite a bit of wording (#252)

* Adjust quite a bit of wording
Also converts many title case things to sentence case (fixes #238)

* Change advised to recommended

* Oops, I missed a page

* That page too

* Missed a spot
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export default {
settings: {
ads: {
title: 'Allow personalized ads',
description: `Marketing/target cookies are usually used to show you advertisements that meet your interests.
When you visit another website, your browser's cookie is recognized and selected ads are displayed to you
based on the information stored in this cookie.`,
title: 'Personalized ads',
description: `Marketing and target cookies are usually used to show you advertisements that meet your interests.
When you visit another website, your browser's cookie is recognized and selected ads are displayed to you based
on the information stored in this cookie.`,
default: true,
},
analytics: {
title: 'Analytics',
description: `Modrinth uses in-house tools that allows us to get insights on how
each user is using the platform, to improve the experience for
everyone.\n By enabling this toggle, you allow us to get information across requests,
disabling it will just remove all PII from now on.`,
description: `Modrinth uses in-house tools that allow us to get insights into how each user is using the platform
in order to improve the experience for everyone.\n By enabling this toggle, you allow us to gather information
across requests. Disabling this toggle will simply remove all PII from now on.`,
default: true,
},
},